The Invisible Cut Page 14
EXT. STREET - DAY
Long shot of car speeding down a residential street. It passes a bungalow and turns into the driveway. Gittes get out of the car and heads to the front door.
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Medium shot of Gittes at the front door. He knocks on the door and a Chinese servant (KAHN) opens it. Gittes starts to push his way in, but Kahn holds him back.
KAHN
You wait.
GITTES
You wait.
They argue in Chinese as Gittes pushes past him and camera follows him inside. A breathless Evelyn rushes down the stairs, coming between them.
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Medium shot of Kahn, Evelyn, and Gittes.
EVELYN
How are you? I’ve been calling you.
(to Kahn, waving him off)
It’s all right.
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Medium shot over Gittes to Evelyn and Kahn.
EVELYN
Have you…have you slept?
GITTES
Sure.
Kahn closes door and starts to head up stairs.
EVELYN
Have you had lunch? Kahn can fix you something.
GITTES
Where’s the girl?
EVELYN
Upstairs. Why?
GITTES
I want to see her.
EVELYN
She’s… she’s having a bath right now, why do you want
to see her?
GITTES
Going some place?
Gittes moves past her into living room and crosses in front of half-packed suitcases. Camera lingers on luggage for a beat.
EVELYN
(OS)
Yes, we have a… 5:30 train to catch.
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Medium close shot of Gittes. Camera pans with him as he moves across room then pans down to telephone. He picks up receiver and dials.
EVELYN
(OS)
Jake?
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Medium close shot of Evelyn. Camera pans with her as she moves across room toward Gittes until they’re both in a two shot.
GITTES
… J. J. Gittes for Lieutenant Escobar.
EVELYN
Look, what’s the matter?? What’s wrong? I told you
we’ve got a 5:30.….
GITTES
(cutting her off)
You’re going to miss your train!
(into phone)
Lou, meet me at 1972 Canyon Drive…
Yeah, soon as you can.
EVELYN
Why did you do that?
Camera pans with him as he moves past her, away from camera.
GITTES
Do you know any good criminal lawyers?
EVELYN
(OS)
No.
Camera settles into medium long shot as he sits down on couch, opens cigarette case.
GITTES
Don’t worry.… I can recommend a couple. They’re expensive but you can afford it.
Shot now includes Evelyn’s back in the foreground.
EVELYN
Will you please tell me what this is all about?
He lights cigarette, pulls folded handkerchief out of his pocket, lays it on table and opens it to reveal a pair of eyeglasses inside.
GITTES
I found these in your backyard in your pond. They belonged to your husband, didn’t they?
FRAME GRAB #1
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Close-up of Evelyn reacting, surprised.
FRAME GRAB #2
GITTES
(cont’d, OS)
Didn’t they?
EVELYN
I don’t know…yes…probably.
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Close shot of Gittes as he stands up into camera.
FRAME GRAB #3
GITTES
Yes positively!
Camera follows him as he walks away from her.
GITTES
(cont’d)
That’s where he was drowned.
He turns to look at her.
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Close-up of Evelyn.
EVELYN
(disbelief)
What?
GITTES
(OS)
There’s no time to be shocked by the truth
The coroner’s…
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Close-up of Gittes.
GITTES
…report proves that he had salt water in his lungs when he was killed, just take my word for it, all right? Now I want to know how it happened and I want to know why and I want to know before Escobar gets here because I don’t want to lose my license.
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Close-up of Evelyn.
EVELYN
I don’t know what you are talking about. This is the craziest, most insane…
He grabs her.
GITTES
(yells, OS)
STOP IT!!… I’m gonna make it easy for ya.
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Close-up of Gittes.
GITTES
You were jealous. You had a fight. He fell. He hit his head. It was an accident. But his girl is a witness.
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Close-up of Evelyn, looking at him in disbelief.
FRAME GRAB #4
GITTES
(OS)
You had to shut her up. You don’t have the guts to harm her but you got the money to keep her mouth shut. Yes or no.
EVELYN
NO!!!!
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Close-up of Gittes. He takes a beat.
GITTES
Who is she? And don’t give me that crap about
your sister because you don’t have a sister.
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Close-up of Evelyn.
EVELYN
I’ll tell you.… I’ll tell you the truth.
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Close-up of Gittes, blowing smoke out of his nose.
FRAME GRAB #5
He calms down, for just a beat.
GITTES
Good. What’s her name?
A beat.
EVELYN
(OS)
Katherine…
A beat.
GITTES
Katherine who?
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Close-up of Evelyn. A beat.
EVELYN
She’s my daughter.
FRAME GRAB #6
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Close-up of Gittes.
In a fury, he swings his arm at her.
FRAME GRAB #7
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Medium close shot over Gittes to Evelyn, being slapped.
FRAME GRAB #8
GITTES
I said I want the truth!
EVELYN
She’s my sister.
He slaps her again.
EVELYN
(cont’d)
She’s my daughter.
He slaps her again.
EVELYN
(cont’d)
My sister, my daughter!
He slaps her again – and again. She’s crying.
GITTES
I said I want the truth!
He grabs her and throws her across the room, making her fall onto the couch. She struggles to sit up.
EVELYN
She’s my sister and my daughter!!
She’s sobbing, then looks off suddenly.
FRAME GRAB #9
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Medium long shot of stairway as Kahn rushes down stairs.
FRAME GRAB #10
EVELYN
(cont’d, OS)
Kahn, go back! For God’s sake, keep her upstairs, go back!
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Close-up of Evelyn in profile. She turns to camera, tears streaming down her face. She look up at Gittes, then away from him.
EVELYN
My father and I…
(closes her eyes, then looks up at him)
Understand? Or is it too t
ough for you?
FRAME GRAB #11
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Close-up of Gittes looking down at her.
FRAME GRAB #12
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Close-up of Evelyn. She makes eye contact, then looks away for a long beat. She cries, laying her head down.
GITTES
(OS)
He raped you.
She looks up at him, then looks away again, devastated.
FRAME GRAB #13
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Close-up at Gittes, reacting.
FRAME GRAB #14
He takes a beat
GITTES
Then what happened?
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Close-up of Evelyn.
EVELYN
I ran away.
GITTES
(OS)
To Mexico.
EVELYN
(nods)
Hollis came and took care of me.
FRAME GRAB #15
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Close-up of Gittes.
EVELYN
(OS)
I couldn’t see her.
FRAME GRAB #16
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Close-up of Evelyn, looking down, tears streaming down her face.
FRAME GRAB #17
She looks up at him.
EVELYN
I was fifteen… I wanted to but I… I couldn’t…
Now I want to be with her. I want to take care of her.
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Close-up of Gittes.
GITTES
Where are you going to take her now?
EVELYN
(OS)
Back…
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Close-up of Evelyn.
EVELYN
…to Mexico.
GITTES
(OS)
Well, you can’t take the train. Escobar will be looking for you everywhere.
EVELYN
(standing up)
H.. h.. how bout a plane?
GITTES
(OS)
No, that’s worse.
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Close-up of Gittes.
GITTES
You better just get out of here. Leave all this stuff here.
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Close-up of Evelyn.
GITTES
(OS)
Where does Kahn live? Get the exact address.
EVELYN
All right.
Camera follows her as she backs away toward stairs — and looks down.
EVELYN
(cont’d)
Uh…those didn’t belong to Hollis.
She turns away toward stairs.
GITTES
(OS)
How do you know?
She turns back, looks at him.
EVELYN
He didn’t wear bifocals.
She looks down at glasses again, back at him, then spins around to head up stairs.
FRAME GRAB #18
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Close-up of Gittes, his eyes following her up the stairs.
FRAME GRAB #19
He looks down, thinking. He walks for a beat, looks down again.
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Insert of eyeglasses on handkerchief.
He picks them up and turns them over in his hand. Hand starts to leave frame…
FRAME GRAB #20
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Medium full shot of Gittes, as he puts glasses inside jacket pocket.
FRAME GRAB #21
He’s thinking, then looks up.
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Medium long shot of staircase.
Evelyn and teenaged girl appear in stairway
EVELYN
Katherine, say hello to Mr. Gittes.
Camera moves in slightly on two women.
KATHERINE
(shyly)
Hello.
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Medium full shot of Gittes.
GITTES
(smiles gently)
Hello.
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Medium long shot of stairs.
Evelyn nods to daughter, who heads back upstairs.
EVELYN
He lives at 1712 Alameda. Do you know where that is?
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Close shot of Gittes.
Camera moves in closer, he reacts strongly.
GITTES
Sure.
He looks down, deep in thought.
FRAME GRAB #22
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Medium long shot of Gittes looking through window at street.
In the foreground Gittes closes blinds and in the background, through the window, Evelyn, Katherine, and Kahn get into car and drive off.
DECONSTRUCTION
While the first scene was about hiding the truth, this one is about revealing the truth. Previously, Evelyn’s evasive looks and actions spoke louder than what was said, but in this scene Gittes and the audience are demanding more, and the change in tone is clearly reflected the way the scene is shot and edited.
The moment Gittes enters the house, he and Evelyn are crowded within the frame. The intimacy of how these actors are positioned reflects their previous sexual intimacy — and Gittes’ anger — and as that fury escalates, so does the momentum of the editing.
The scene really picks up pace when Gittes shows Evelyn the “smoking gun,” the eyeglasses that he insists are her husband’s (the “out” frame is Frame grab #1). The editor has saved Evelyn’s first close-up for her important reaction to this evidence (the “in” frame is Frame grab #2). The editor also overlapped the dialogue slightly when he cut to the shot of Evelyn, satisfying the audience’s urgent need to see her reaction.
frame grab 1
frame grab 2
When Gittes demands her to answer whether the glasses are, in fact, her husband’s, the editor makes a high-energy visual choice. The point where he cuts to Gittes (the “in” frame is Frame grab #3) comes in the middle of his jumping up to challenge her. The editor stays with Gittes’ energy as he paces.